Thanks for your comments. I stitched over the notes and words. See what you think!!! I posted it again.
Looks lovely to me and shows all of the wording on the screen. I'd be happy with it.
Jacqueline
katydid, You did a great job. From the picture the words like fine to me. Even though it is still in the hoop I wouldn't recommend going over all of the stitching again. The chance of a whoops is too great and from what I can tell it looks fine now. If there is a small spot somewhere that's bothering you, you might do a do-over there but not the whole thing.