I like both wording but if you are running a boutique then definitely use the first one.
I don't think I'm the one to do the wording for you but here are some qusetions that will need answering.
How big do you want the writing to be?
Total length?
Height?
All one line?
What font?
We are in the process of building the business. My partner's medium is paint & my medium is fabric :)
I would think the size would be 1" x 1.5" and on 2 lines. We use both French Script MT & Free Style Font on our business logo. But I would be good with any font (whatever font would be the easiest). Thanks for giving me the heads up on other needed information.